Tuesday, 23 March 2010

Review: Exploring Limits by Nicki Bennett and Ariel Tachna

I like m/m/m books and I've read and really liked a number of stories by this pair of authors. It's a shame then, that Exploring Limits was such a dull and disappointing read.

Part of my reasons why I found this a dull read was that the book is essentially page after page of sex with very little plot at all. In fact, the book follows the same pattern over and over again. The story begins with two gay English actors, Kit and Devon, admiring another actor, an American, Jonathan. They decide to club together to seduce the straight man. This proves remarkably easy and they have sex; this is followed by more sex; a misunderstanding during sex which is sorted out, then more sex; a visit to a sex shop and more sex; some inappropriate groping on set, followed by more sex; they get tested and have more sex. The end. Now, there are times when I like books with lots of sex in them but I found this book had a number of other problems which meant that the sex scenes were just not holding my interest at all.

My main problem stemmed from the way that the authors had chosen to structure their book. The story is told in the alternate viewpoints of each of the three men. The narrative switched frequently between the characters so that sometimes there was only a paragraph spent in each character's head. I found this very irritating at first as I kept losing track of whose head I was in and had to read back over the paragraph to orientate myself. In some ways I can understand why the authors did this. After all, the main complaint about m/m/m books is that it's difficult to get an understanding of how all the characters are feeling during a scene. Unfortunately, in the case of this book it made the narrative very choppy and stilted and meant that the writing didn't flow very well. The authors also had a tendency to try and show the same action as seen from the point of view of each character. An example of this is from the first sex scene where the simple act of one character removing the trousers of another character is stretched out over three paragraphs and shown from three points of view. This made the action very slow moving and, at times, quite tedious to read.

Another aspect of the book which kept pulling me out of the action was that some of the sexual positions in the book were physically impossible. There were several occasions where I was brought up short because I just couldn't picture how the scene was taking place. For example, there was one scene where one man was laid on top of another man, kissing him and the third man leaned in to give the man on the bottom a blow job. Unless the third man had a very thin head, then this just would not have been possible. Each time this happened I was brought out of the scene as I tried to work out what was happening. I'm the sort of reader who likes a certain amount of realism in my sex scenes and a few times I was sceptical that some of the sexual acrobatics I read in this book could ever have taken place in real life.

One final disappointment was that, because the book is so focused on sex, there was very little in terms of character development, motivation or even just basic information. I finished the book knowing almost as little about the three men as I had at the start. The men are defined only by their nationality, their vague age or their hair colour, with only the character of Kit being given any fleshing out at all, and even then it's only slight. This led to me seeing the men in only the blandest, colourless way and as a result it made it very difficult for me to care very much about them, their situation or their relationship at all. This doesn't mean the characters weren't attractive or nice, they were; just that they had little or no substance to them.

If you are the sort of reader who likes a lot of sex in their m/m books and aren't too bothered about a decent plot or character development, then this book should appeal to you. Aside from some of the physically impossible positioning that I mentioned above, the sex scenes are varied and well structured. I also got the sense that the trio were moving away from a relationship based purely on lust and starting to have an emotional connection, so there was some romantic feelings in and amongst all the sex scenes.

Overall, I'm afraid I can't recommend this book, which gets a grade of 'Poor', for all the reasons I have given in this review. I must admit that I am very disappointed as all the books and stories that I've read from this pair have been winners for me. Just not this one, unfortunately.

Buy this book HERE.

11 comments:

  1. I can't give an absolute as to what constitutes excessive head hopping in a book, but I know when I'm reading it (for example, the book that I was reading which alternated paragraphs between each of the two heroes, plus the cat) - I'm willing to bet this book exceeds my threshold. :)

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  2. Chris: I think this would probably cross your head-hopping threshold, yes. :)

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  3. OMG, I laughed out loud at the thin head comment. LOL Too funny.

    I agree with you 100%. Like me you listed all the times the weren't actually involved in having sex and it was about 4 or 5 scenes in the whole book. The blurb talks about the American's (can't be bothered looking up his name) reticence to be in a gay relationship because of his son, and yes he's in England but he's wide open, groping in bars, going to sex shops, no fear of the paparazzi (he's supposed to be pretty famous) and he never even mentions his son or where the relationship is heading since they all seem in love. And I was furious in that scene with Kit, I liked his character (probably because it was the only one half-way fleshed out) and I thought he deserved better. I was very disappointed in this one as I'd read another book but the authors I enjoyed. Oh well, can't win them all I guess.

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  4. Ditto Jen. It just was not good enough :(

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  5. I really like the idea of m/m/m books -- the polyamorous "we're a permanent threesome" kind I mean. (What can I say, menage totally turns me on, and it's even better when all 3 have an emotional bond.) Unfortunately, the reality of the situation is that, however much I like the idea of such a book, I can hardly think of any examples that I've actually enjoyed. ("911" by Chris Owen comes to mind as ok/good, but that's pretty much it.)

    Anyway, my point is, I would describe almost every m/m/m book I've read as "dull" and consisting of "page after page of sex with very little plot." I don't understand why they all seem to be like that, and it's unfortunate that this is just another example.

    Honestly, I'm starting to think I should just give up on the idea of finding a quality m/m/m book! :(

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  6. Hi Tam
    The whole business with Jonathan's son had me scratching my head. Why bother to mention it in the blurb at all, if it's only given a couple of lines in the story? After that very brief mention it's like his son just disappears and he never thinks of him again.

    I found out today that this is the first of a series of 6 books so maybe Jonathan's son becomes a bigger part of the overarching story.

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  7. Hi Ingrid
    As you can tell by the review, I was disappointed.

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  8. Hi ravynrants
    Have you tried The Strongest Shape by Tessa Cardenas or Bound to Please by Kimberley Gardner? I really enjoyed both of those m/m/m books and thought there was a good balance of sex/non-sex scenes.

    There's also Warriors and Healers by HG Brues which hardly has any sex in it, but I wasn't as keen on because of other issues.

    You are right, many m/m/m books are just an excuse for page after page of three way sex scenes. Like you, I'm interested in the emotional dynamic of a threesome relationship and often feel disappointed when that is swept aside in favour of sexual thrills.

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  9. Hmmm. Usually if I connect in any way with the characters I am tempted to read a sequel, if nothing else to see if it improves but I don't think I would in this case unless it got a glowing review from someone I trust. It did have that feel though of "this is how we got started" then more in the next book. But just not my taste I guess.

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  10. I won't be reading any of the other books in the series Jen unless the writers make a 180 turn for the better.

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  11. Tam: I've not read any reviews for the second book, not even on GRs which suggests that all those who read the 1st book may have not gone onto read the 2nd one.

    Ingrid: I don't think you'll be the only one who'll be doing that.

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