Friday, 11 January 2013

Guest Post: But I like it here... by Blaine D. Arden

Today I'm delighted to take a short break from my blog holiday to introduce the very lovely Blaine D Arden. She's here as part of the three year anniversary celebrations from Storm Moon Press, one of my favourite publishers. Today Blaine is talking about the difficulties of writing a series of stories set in the same universe. Over to you, Blaine!

Writing separate stories in the same world

It was simple, really. I found a world I liked, and I didn't want to leave. A rather magical world with a nice little village in the middle of a forest, where two different types of elves had made their homes. I'd been breathing, living, and discovering that village for two to three months at least, got to know their way of life, their characters, their magical talents, and I just couldn't let them go.

Write a sequel, you say? Yeah... No. A sequel was the furthest thing from my mind at that point. No, I already had a new story burrowing its way into my heart and mind. All I had was the opening scene, but it looked good in my head, and I couldn't wait to start writing it. Yet... I couldn't seem to drag myself out of the Forester's world.

And then I started thinking. I can see you rolling your eyes. It's always dangerous when us writers start thinking, I know, but that's how we work, isn't it? We think, we wonder, we ask ourselves questions, and we imagine, and suddenly we've filled page after page with new ideas.

Well, this idea let me stay in that wonderful world I discovered while writing The Forester. Even though I only wrote about one tribe in that short story, there had to be more tribes living in that fantasy world, right? Closing my eyes, I pictured my opening scene in the Forester's world, and it all just clicked. A different tribe in a different village with different characters, and, voila, Oren's Right was born.

If only it was really that easy, my story would have been finished at least two months before I actually ended up finishing it. But it wasn't so simple. Though it felt right, when I started writing that first scene, all sorts of questions rose up in me. Yes, I'd already done the basic ground work for how my elfin society worked, had sussed out the laws of magic, and had a number of occupations I could re-use for these new characters. But... wasn't I just rehashing the same theme?

Suddenly, playing in my own sandbox didn't seem half as exciting.

I needed some basic rules. I needed to create enough changes between both tribes so I wouldn't feel like I was rewriting The Forester. So, I grabbed my notebook and began making a list of things I could change. First, I created a slightly different layout of the new village, different plants and trees, and different ways of how Healers worked. In Kelnaht's village, every Healer has their own infirmary, while in Oren's village there is one large infirmary where all Healers work together.

I imagined a different cloud elf/tree elf ratio, which automatically led me to having an Elders' Court housed in the trunks of two large trees, connected to each other by a Forester, instead of high up in a tree. And from my opening scene, I knew this village was built right next to a river/lake. Slowly, the new tribe took shape, and I started to enjoy creating this new village.

Every addition drew me deeper into my forest world, deepened my understanding of it. When I wrote The Forester, I focused only on that tribe, even though they were only a small part of a complete world. Creating Oren's Right for the Carved in Flesh anthology, I was far more aware of the many possibilities of that world, and it only made me want to explore more.

Once the setting was finished, I moved on to characterisation. Their occupations were more or less set in stone, since every tribe in this world has a Guide, Truth Seeker, Forester, smith, healer, and elders. This meant I had to be careful about creating my characters, and make sure they didn't resemble their colleagues from The Forester too much.

Because the Guide in The Forester was rather young, I made the one in Oren's Right older. Older, a little wiser maybe, and less cryptic, but no less trustworthy as the tribe's confessor and confidant.

The Truth Seeker was a no-brainer. With both Kelnaht and Brem being men, I knew I had to have a female Truth Seeker in Oren's Right. The fact that both Mir and Kelnaht end up in triads happened by accident. I didn't even know Mir had two lovers until I'd written her kissing scene, but it made sense to me, so I let that slide.

Creating a Forester was tricky. I had my main character, Veld, pegged as a bit of an outsider, a traveller, a black elf who hadn't been part of this tribe for very long, but I didn't have an occupation for him. I was a bit stuck on that, to be honest. I was a bit stuck on finding a Forester, too, not knowing whether a Forester would even play a large part in the story. After fruitlessly searching the web for occupations for Veld, I gave up and just wrote Forester behind his name.

That seemed to do the trick, because, once I'd put that down I came up with more and more insight on who Veld was, and what made him stay in this new tribe, aside from falling in love with Oren, of course. It also gave me an opportunity to show readers more about what a Forester did.

As for Oren, the 'real' main character of Oren's Right, even if he isn't the POV-character, the moment I came up with my opening scene, I knew Oren was the gentle giant type. In my mind, I saw him kneading dough, and from that moment on I'd dubbed my story my 'mute magical baker' story, though I can't even remember what made me think he was mute.

Being mute set Oren apart from his tribe in a sense. With a few exceptions, hey treated him as if he was a child, as if he couldn't take care of himself. But Veld, who'd fallen for Oren at their first meeting, understood his gesturing and treated him like an equal. Of course, the path of their love isn't easy, just like the Kelnaht's path to love isn't easy. But easy isn't as fulfilling as having to work hard to get what you want, nor is it any fun to write.

All in all, trying to balance the similarities between both tribes with the differences to keep the world fresh yet recognisable has been challenging, but a lot of fun. I hope everyone enjoys the magic of my forest world, because I'm not done with it yet. Nothing's set in stone, but I'm close to finishing part two of The Forester and already have plans for the third and final part. After that, there are still plenty of villages to visit and plenty of characters to discover. I really do like it here :)

Both The Forester and Oren's Right can be found at Storm Moon Press, along with my other works and a couple free reads. Storm Moon Press is currently celebrating their anniversary, too, so it's a perfect time to take a look, as all their titles are on sale!

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  1. You sneaked one in!! Cheeky! :) :)

    Lovely to hear from Blaine - and a great post. Series work is always interesting.


    1. Thanks, Anne :)

      This seperate story idea was fun, but writing the actual sequel to the Forester was HELL!.
      I like the result, but the process was far more difficult than I'd ever imagined.

  2. Blaine, thanks for your insight on how you went about writing the two different tribes. When I was almost at the end of my NaNo novel two of the characters screamed at me for their own story. This is my first finished novel amongst a few I've started. Your comments here along with another writer's I just read yesterday will help me greatly in accomplishing book 2. My intention was to just to write the one book but I've come to learn it usually is the norm with a lot of writers. ;-)
    Thanks for sharing your words and the opportunity at the giveaway!


    1. You're welcome, Rush. I'm glad it helped you sort your novel out :)

      Isn't it fun when secondary characters demand their own screen time? It hasn't happened to me yet, but I know it's a rather regular occurrence :)

  3. I love series, and it is fascinating to learn how an author builds a world big enough to sustain multiple stories and characters. I got a boxed set of The Chronicles of Narnia when I was a kid, and was disappointed at singletons. Still am, sometimes! Thank you!

    brendurbanist at gmail dot com

    1. I have a love/hate relationships with series, both readig and writing them. Which is why writing separate stories in the same world is a workable compromise for me. Sort of the best of both worlds, really. I can create a finished standalone book in an existing world that I love.

      I gladly leave the 'real' series writing to authors who thrive on it. :)

  4. I adore series, and books that take place in the smae world are wonderful. I find a place I like and I just never want to leave!


    1. I find a place I like and I just never want to leave!

      that's it exactly :)

  5. The trouble with really good series is that I get hooked on the and can't wait for the next one - sometimes years later. And sometimes the author decides not to write any more... oh woe!


    1. Good point! Unfinished series are excruciating.

      I don't read many series for that same reason, or I wait as long as possible. Though... with auto-buy authors, I keep breaking that resolution. *sigh*

  6. Loved 'The Forester'. Looking forward to the sequel.

    1. Thank you :)
      I hope you'll like it. (I hope to be done with editing soon, so I can send it to the publisher)

  7. I really enjoy Blaine's writing and reading this posting was fun to understand her creation of her stories.

    strive4bst(At) hotmail(dot)com

    1. Thank you :)
      It was fun sharing the workings of my brain with you all!

  8. Thanks a bunch for sharing with us! I like when authors revisit worlds I like with different characters. I like sequels, but sometimes it's better to just start over with a new set and maybe have the first book's mcs in the background. Thanks again for sharing your inner workings!



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